Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
People around the world have different beliefs that children will get a better life in a city, whilst others tend to believe that life in the countryside is more beneficial. Both places have their own positive and negative outcomes.
There are several benefits of upbringing the children in the city. To compete with the current competitive world, it is highly essential to provide the best education in order to prepare the youngsters for their future. Which means this will lead to a higher rate of literacy. Secondly, staying in a city will open the doors of job opportunities as most of the businesses and industries are spread all over the city which will result in wider options for the individual to choose their preferred career field. Consequently, nurturing one's child in cities can have a negative impact, such as the pollution in cities caused by gas emissions from the vehicles. In addition, this will affect one's health and reduce the life expectancy.
People who spend their lives in the countryside do not face much health issues such as stress. The countryside is slow as compared to the life in a city, which results in becoming a healthy person. Moreover, children are close to nature and consume organic food unlike in the cities. Secondly, people often have their own source of income to spend their life. But, there are a few drawbacks as well. For example, a sedentary lifestyle and poor education system along with lower job opportunities.
In conclusion, it depends on an individual as what are his priorities in life, if they can't afford to live in a city or dislike the fast-paced life they can often choose to spend their lives in the countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8986013986 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6671630282 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7531105364 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18013991309 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596025215245 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629885340807 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124343804589 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828286178239 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.