Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is argued that, adults can get the precise education by self-study rather than attending to classroom trainings. I completely agree with this statement that mature people can manage to learn the things by their own as compared to instructor's coaching and eventually, it helps them to achieve the success.
Firstly, people became extremely busy in their daily routine and if they want to learn new things, then they struggle a lot to manage their timings for classes. While doing study by their own, one can utilize the time wisely and therefore, can handle the multiple things at the same time. According to a recent survey carried out in United States of America, it was observed that people, who were doing distance education , were able to accomplish their educational goals with good grace by managing their dedicated time for office and home.
In addition, nowadays, the world is open for everyone where most of the educational material is freely available over the internet. People can gather unlimited information using e-books, videos. Usually, one can get only single approach for particular topic in classrooms, whereas, if one try to read a lot about the same topic by own then it becomes beneficial to get multiple angles to understand that topic. Basically, to understand any specific subject, one should recognize all perspectives of the same. According to a recent survey carried out in Japan, seventy percent of people preferring to do self-study for their masters as they are able to get all required information over multiple online sites.
In conclusion, it is observed that the self-study is a better option for grown up people because of easy access to all information about the subjects as well as the time flexibility benefit. In my opinion, adults should try to grasp the knowledge from open sources rather than the traditional way of learning like classroom trainings.
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Suggestion:
...of America, it was observed that people, who were doing distance education , were...
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Suggestion: ,
...ople, who were doing distance education , were able to accomplish their education...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...er than the traditional way of learning like classroom trainings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11217948718 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70201800614 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2485379912 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.916666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21434988834 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078421311861 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476957811925 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135191664023 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0096457835181 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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