Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many think technology nowadays making people to be isolated, while others think modern technology helps to be sociable with people. In my opinion I feel this development will increase the opportunity to become more social active. Meeting new people and learning from them always helps in one's life. In the below essay I will address the assumptions of the public and conclude with my opinion.
On one hand, people talk less even when they are nor alone due to the wide range of Smartphones availability in everyone's pockets. They argue technology is making people more lazy and unhealthier. In the past many use to group with their families and go to a cinema. Now with the advent of latest streaming services, people prefers to watch directly from their home or directly on their phones. Messengers like Facebook are helping such kind of people to chat or interact with them virtually instead of meeting personally.
For example, one of my friends interview with the girl before marriage was on skype, they never met personally until their engagement.
On the other side, many points out the advantages of the technology and I say it is helping a lot to meet new people from various countries around the world and provides a chance to learn new languages. For instance, my friend found an online turor when he was looking for a job in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam. The job requirement is to understand Vietnamese upto some extent. Without going anywhere, he sits on his couch and learned a language with in six months.
Although, many argue that, technology is making people life socially inactive. It is finding many ways to be more socially present in alternate ways than meeting in-person. This will helps people to meet new people and increase their communication skills which helps while talking with anyone in this modern era.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... and learning from them always helps in ones life. In the below essay I will address...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun use seems to be countable; consider using: 'many uses'.
Suggestion: many uses
... more lazy and unhealthier. In the past many use to group with their families and go to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... lazy and unhealthier. In the past many use to group with their families and go to ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... ways than meeting in-person. This will helps people to meet new people and increase ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96463022508 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58430900493 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0726384151 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8235294118 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246862520387 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819272943075 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899806366197 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133815469725 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966705944422 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.