Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree?
It has been alleged by fair amount of people that state should charge more tax on junk and packed food in order to motivate people to have healthy eating habits. However, I assert that there are many other ways that will encourage people to consume healthy food.
To begin with, high tax on unhealthy food will alter the eating habit of poverty stricken people, but there are many who can conveniently afford to buy the eatable at high price. So a segment of society will be affected by this change. Moreover, it will make the situation adverse for the people who are not able to buy healthy food, because of its high price. Rather than increasing the price of fast food, if the cost of fresh fruits and vegetables is decreased it will benefit the society in much better way. Government has to open the shops of the healthy food in more number so that it will be convenient for the public to purchase that the same and also try to provide this fresh food at affordable price.
To substantiate further, spreading awareness among general public is another vital way to alter the eating habits of the citizens. Authorities has to teach the people about the numerous benefits of healthy food for human body and how unhealthy eating habits increase obesity and cause other healthy issues. Including this in school curriculum will help the student to learn about the importance of balanced diet and negatives consequences of fast food on their body. Organizing awareness campaigns at public places will definitely educate the people and they will alter their eating habit and choose healthy food for their entire family.
In conclusion, unequivocally increasing tax on junk food will make only subtle change for few population. Spreading awareness about the advantages of healthy food and making it available at more places and at less price will encourage more people to adapt healthy food in their daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89846153846 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42816998323 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504615384615 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9390359499 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285744953298 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119665487724 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804882131347 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213947939888 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687276380303 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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