What are the causes of water shortages? What are your solutions?
It can not deny that nature has blessed human beings by providing natural resources. Water is one of the most crucial sources which is very essential for lives on earth. However, this source is becoming scarcer and even getting worse than ever in the near future. This essay will look at the causes and propose some measures.
The major problem may be the rapid growth of the world population which approximates 50 million a year. People are now using freshwater excessively for the necessary needs such as foods and drinks. Take the agricultural industry is an example. The more farm products are supplied the more drops people withdraw for the large fields. Moreover, the traditional method of irrigation wastes a lot of drainage drops due to evaporation, water conveyance, and the overuse of groundwater. To tackle this shortage the government should run well-planned giving birth policies and invest in extensive irrigation techniques such as micro-irrigation.
Another issue is the fast development of industries and technologies which causes serious impacts on the liquid's scarcity. Many manufacturing parts require freshwater as much as possible, but most industries also dump toxic chemicals and contaminated fluid into clean natural streams. This matter could be addressed by releasing harsh regulations and strong sentences for offenders. The forward way might be to hold the raindrops in the water recharge systems and recycle waste liters into drinkable for plants.
To sum up, the main causes of this water crisis probably derive from the boom in population and economic growth. The appropriate solutions mentioned above should be taken with the view to preserve the freshwater for later generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'liquids'' or 'liquid's'?
Suggestion: liquids'; liquid's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, moreover, so, well, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35925925926 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88054112048 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674074074074 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2979007882 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956977242844 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277137585984 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303078358291 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608924170068 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273705948842 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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