The people we work with have many different characteristics and all of them affect the quality of our time at work. Of the following, what do you think is the most important quality for a boss or supervisor to have?
-a serious attitude about their work
-a lot of related experience
-a tendency to always tell the truth
These days, a number of people spend their lot of time at their workplace, and their enjoyment really depends on the characteristics of their supervisor. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that there are two main qualities for a splendid boss, which are serious attitude and sincerity. This essay will provide further aspects and examples to support this idea in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, a serious working boss can encourage the people to be professional. He or she is usually keen on company’s works and has a strong sense of responsibility. Furthermore, as he or she truly understands about the operation of the company, staffs in the company will be motivated and worked every procedure in the professional way. I can attest this with my own experience; my old supervisor, who like to travel, often missed the company. His absent caused the company lack good operation, and staffs could not effectively work. Therefore, our works were overwhelming and had numerous mistakes. Every staffs had to work doubly. If the supervisor had been more serious, this would not have happened.
Secondly, another fact that supports my standpoint is that an honest boss will acquire respects from staffs. As he or she always tell the truth to the members, it will develop good relationship in the company. Importantly, a good relationship makes good operation, and it improves the works’ quality. For instance, when people in the company have trust each other, they have not problems between others. Consequently, members in the company will tend to be happy in the workplace. According to the research from Harvard University in Boston, the happiness of workers in company affects to the quality of company’s performance. This relation creates mutual advantages to both company and staffs.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that attitude of working and honesty are the essential factors to be a good supervisor. This is due to the fact that staffs will happy to work with a trustworthy boss, and they will have a good operation from a serious working supervisor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tells'.
Suggestion: tells
...spects from staffs. As he or she always tell the truth to the members, it will devel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14202898551 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02057079558 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3757181743 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301258769749 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882684398271 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651769801313 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192900934654 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559399563878 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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