Do you think the consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
We encounter people with different perceptions on various aspects of life experiences. With regard to the over packaging products, we can witness people holding two sets of opinions. One set of people believe that producer must avoid extra packaging whereas, the other set of people say consumer can stop buying such items. In my opinion both parties must work on this to control supplementary covering.
First and foremost packaging ensures that people can buy and use products, as and when they want with good condition. However it is undeniable that some goods have excessive covering. Moreover, the packaging industry is highly competitive and they need to come-up with better solutions to compete with competitors. Whenever manufacturers spend higher cost to fulfill their wrapping needs, eventually consumers will have to bare the extra cost.
From consumer perspective, the packaging does not really matter for majority of the buyers as they mostly care about price, quality of a product. But the packages used for these products are not environmental friendly. It is also recommended to involve government organizations to pretend these poisonous gases to save our environment.
To conclude, producers should be careful of the material usage while packaging the products, It is also recommended that health ministry should place rules and regulations. Last but not least buyers also follow these rules to have healthiest society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nd when they want with good condition. However it is undeniable that some goods have e...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended involving'.
Suggestion: recommended involving
... not environmental friendly. It is also recommended to involve government organizations to pretend the...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...d place rules and regulations. Last but not least buyers also follow these rules to have ...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the healthiest'.
Suggestion: have the healthiest
...least buyers also follow these rules to have healthiest society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, whereas, while, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46875 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83947873895 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.540411800872 121% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7357804901 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169569320834 0.272083759551 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535550394203 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436808697606 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907243082669 0.162205337803 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018030371094 0.0443174109184 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.8541721854 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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