Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
People are increasingly being discriminated in the recent years despite many attempts by the government to fix it. People's opinions differ as to whether not older people should be given promotions. While there are some strong arguments against this setting, I firmly believe that age is merely a number and workers should not be judged based on their age. This essay will discuss the reasons why older people must not be treated differently than the younger people.
There are several reasons why discrimination should not take place in the workplace. Firstly, it is unfair and unethical to treat an employee differently based on the age, sex or religion. Every employee should be treated in the same way. PNG, for example, is treating all their workforce in the same way. Thus, maintaining a balance is the prominent objective of any organization.
In addition to making the workplace better, it is predicted that age discrimination makes employees suffer from various mental disorders, including, sleep disruption and obesity. As a consequence, employee ends up mentally disturbed during their employment. For instance, many reports suggest that employees lose their health as result of discrimination.
In conclusion, discrimination should be made illegal as it treats employees based on their age, race and other aspects. In my opinion, old people should be treated in the same way how young people are treated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ment to fix it. Peoples opinions differ as to whether not older people should be given promot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30530973451 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93485605458 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619469026549 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3412320573 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6428571429 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225329297099 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826748918391 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068145587256 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145122561213 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590597933318 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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