Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society?
Surely, there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals the recent invention which is beneficial for human life has been one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the benefits of internet for society. Regarding this I would like to say my viewpoint in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, there are so many advantage the internet is very beneficial for us. With the help of internet we can easily communicate with others. The main advantage of internet is its ability to connect billion of computers and devices to each other. Furthermore, we can receive and share information between users. Another advantage of the modern internet is its ability for automation. So, internet gives many benefits for students, they can use it for them carrier growth and get knowledge from it. If I talk about without knowledge it is a source of enjoyment also we can see different types of funny clips and games in free time. Moreover, internet is a source of knowledge and enjoyment also.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...paragraph. To begin with, there are so many advantage the internet is very beneficial for us....
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...e of internet is its ability to connect billion of computers and devices to each other....
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Line 2, column 695, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... is a source of knowledge and enjoyment also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 190.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97894736842 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74482641021 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6587067973 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0444491581984 0.242375264174 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160477915845 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394231655779 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420229263636 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291744366153 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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