The effect of xenophobia, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of xenophobia has sparked the controversy over the years. It can be said that government can erdicate the incidence of xenophobia by awarnes

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The effect of xenophobia, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of xenophobia has sparked the controversy over the years. It can be said that government can erdicate the incidence of xenophobia by awarness programms. This essay will elaborate how this phenomenon can jeopardise the economic growth of country and how regulatory bodies can overcome this situation and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why this problem has become serious issue, but the most conspicuous one stems onethe fact thatt immigrated people are using resources and filling the job spaces due to high competition in job market which causes anxiety and stress between native people because they areunempolyedd. For example, migrated people live in their own communities, which isolated them from native people in a result of increasing this problem. So it is worse for humankind and create myriad of problems in the world.

Approach to deal with the setbacks originated by xenophobia, but the most effective one is that government should acknowledge the responsibility to aware the people and making understanding between each others. For example,governmett should encourage the responsibility between people of different culture, age, religion and background through sharing of their experiences, which will help them in curtailing the culture of hatre ,, which is notimpractiablee ad unattainable butcomprihensiblee andfeasiblee. Hence, government can overcome the situations ofviolancee and crime rates.

Xenophobia is increasing in western countries the impact of this incidence is prominent, although government can overcome this problem by implementing the rules on people should not be overlooked.

The effect of xenophobia, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of xenophobia has sparked the controversy over the years. It can be said that government can erdicate the incidence of xenophobia by awarness programms. This essay will elaborate how this phenomenon can jeopardise the economic growth of country and how regulatory bodies can overcome this situation and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why this problem has become serious issue, but the most conspicuous one stems onethe fact thatt immigrated people are using resources and filling the job spaces due to high competition in job market which causes anxiety and stress between native people because they areunempolyedd. For example, migrated people live in their own communities, which isolated them from native people in a result of increasing this problem. So it is worse for humankind and create myriad of problems in the world.

Approach to deal with the setbacks originated by xenophobia, but the most effective one is that government should acknowledge the responsibility to aware the people and making understanding between each others. For example,governmett should encourage the responsibility between people of different culture, age, religion and background through sharing of their experiences, which will help them in curtailing the culture of hatre ,, which is notimpractiablee ad unattainable butcomprihensiblee andfeasiblee. Hence, government can overcome the situations ofviolancee and crime rates.

Xenophobia is increasing in western countries the impact of this incidence is prominent, although government can overcome this problem by implementing the rules on people should not be overlooked.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , governmett
...tanding between each others. For example,governmett should encourage the responsibility bet...
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Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...them in curtailing the culture of hatre ,, which is notimpractiablee ad unattainab...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his problem by implementing the rules on people should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, thus, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76136363636 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31505514308 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.740912826 50.4703680194 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362362264251 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181463672108 0.0925447433944 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194717561507 0.071462118173 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2303050142 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.215041910659 0.0609392437508 353% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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