The effects of environmental pollution, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of pollution has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on environment and living things. It can be said that environment pollution should be managed by individuals as well as by government authorities. This essay will elaborate how government bodies can contribute in this issue and how people can participate actively to overcome this problem and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous government should put more emphasis on regulating the environment, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that government should make strict rule and implement in way so people can easily follow. For example, government bodies promote cleaner environment by conducting workshops also should aware people by educating them, because in some countries around the world are still lacking basic education. Hence, that would be a great approach towards environment.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing idea and tend to believe that individual is also responsible for cleaning surroundings. Also, each individual can make huge contributions in terms of reducing pollution also instead of cutting trees they should avoid deforestation and encourage to grow more trees, so living things can also survive. For example, research showed that a growing cause of pollution is cutting more trees and not planting trees. So, this is not the only responsibility of government but also each person should contribute to combat this issue.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of pollution on environment is prominent, although the way government and individual's participation in cleaner environment should be overlooked.
The effects of environmental pollution, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of pollution has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on environment and living things. It can be said that environment pollution should be managed by individuals as well as by government authorities. This essay will elaborate how government bodies can contribute in this issue and how people can participate actively to overcome this problem and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous government should put more emphasis on regulating the environment, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that government should make strict rule and implement in way so people can easily follow. For example, government bodies promote cleaner environment by conducting workshops also should aware people by educating them, because in some countries around the world are still lacking basic education. Hence, that would be a great approach towards environment.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing idea and tend to believe that individual is also responsible for cleaning surroundings. Also, each individual can make huge contributions in terms of reducing pollution also instead of cutting trees they should avoid deforestation and encourage to grow more trees, so living things can also survive. For example, research showed that a growing cause of pollution is cutting more trees and not planting trees. So, this is not the only responsibility of government but also each person should contribute to combat this issue.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of pollution on environment is prominent, although the way government and individual's participation in cleaner environment should be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'growing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: growing
...hould avoid deforestation and encourage to grow more trees, so living things can also s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 5.75862068966 434% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54642857143 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09482575092 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4121999188 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370712847905 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157014992763 0.0925447433944 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18193235104 0.071462118173 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236524614998 0.151781067708 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.224390685188 0.0609392437508 368% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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