Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Extreme sports such as skiing, rafting, and diving are perceived as recreational activities and they often involve speed, height, and advanced gears. People's opinions differ as to whether or not people should take part in such extreme sports. While there are some strong arguments against the setting of extreme sports, I firmly believe that extreme sports should not be banned. This essay will discuss the reasons why these should be allowed.
Firstly, extreme sports should be allowed because it offers employment to certain highly qualified players. As a consequence, players earn more money from advertisements from big entertainment companies. For example, a famous player earned more money by taking part extreme sports such as mountain climbing, skiing, and rafting. Thus, extreme sports play a significant role in the player's life.
In addition to bringing employment offers, extreme sports help in burning more calorie as well as being fit. Health benefits are a significant contribution to extreme sports in human lives. In spite of the above arguments some people might promulgate the idea that these sports are dangerous, however in my opinion, these sports are fun.
To conclude, extreme sports have health benefits and help significantly in employment aspects. In my opinion, extreme sports should not be banned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
...advanced gears. Peoples opinions differ as to whether or not people should take part in such extreme...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...e sports play a significant role in the players life. In addition to bringing employ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45410628019 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65897160409 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3336476131 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8461538462 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401847917812 0.242375264174 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159798713234 0.0925447433944 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100907450171 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26752675954 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733222243481 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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