Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions.
Increasing youth involvement in crimes has sparked the debate and raised concerns worldwide as youth is the future of any nation. Society and government people are looking for the causes of this phenomenon and what could be the best possible solution to save young people. This essay will discuss the causes and the possible solutions and thus lead to a reasonable solution.
To commence with, there are many causes, those might force young people to commit crime, and the main reason could be either financial need or bad influence. When young people are unemployed and don’t have money to survive, then they steal valuable items to fulfil their financial needs. During unemployment young individuals might get influenced by bad company and get addicted to drugs, to quench their thirst for drugs they commit crimes. Drug related crime rates have increased dramatically. For example, in Canada, young people were accused of drug related offenses have nearly doubled in past the ten years. Therefore, most of the juvenile criminals either jobless or influenced by bad company and addicted to drugs.
Preventing youth crime before it happens is the best way to protect society and even youth also. As a society, there is a need of new policies and schemes to provide jobs and employment to young individuals. As a result, they can fulfil their financial need and employment also brings mental stability. Government should educate people and make aware them about adverse effects of drugs. For instance, according to research, high employment rate will reduce the youth crime rates from 30% to 10%. Government should organize campaigns to spread awareness and create more job opportunities.
In conclusion, government should create new schemes, policies and more opportunities to decrease the crime rate in youth because youngsters are our future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29054054054 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63582804473 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0579756932 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.875 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172497771093 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608307778005 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727476136381 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117110203753 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580175212014 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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