Is it a foolish idea to get married before finishing studies and settling down? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The effect of getting married before settling down, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of early marriage has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on young people over the years. It can be said that getting married is beneficial for youngsters, but it has various drawbacks. This essay will elaborate how partner's support can be helpful to maintain the balance between study and married life and how early marriage can result in stress and financial difficulties.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why getting married has myriad of benefits, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that one can get partner's support, be it mentally or financially, which can help to concentrate even more on the studies and facilitate amazing results and better career opportunities. For instance, a high percentage of the students who go to overseas for getting a degree, are married and perform well both in their academic and working career as their partners support them by working.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of getting married before completing studies, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that not only does early marriage put extra cognitive strain and endless responsibilities, but it leads to poor academic results and unsuccessful career. As an illustration, students who get married before finishing their academic education, are less successful than those who do not. So it deteriorates student's future goal and achievements.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impact of early married is prominent, although the way partner support help the pupils should not be overlooked.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35106382979 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92225477313 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8959043414 50.4703680194 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.9 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18756309204 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791628023667 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635664330937 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110266034405 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363404473018 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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