Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion.
One of the most conspicuous trend of today’s is a world is a colossal upsurge in large shopping malls are replacing small shops. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of stance. The most preponderant one is that large shopping malls can not only contribute to small shops, but that also leads to numerous other benefits in various fields. It offers not only can one benefits more when it comes to being effective, but that can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much cause of efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as for as, arguments their chances of prosperity and excellence are concerned.
There are however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm potential benefits. Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. People have not realized its gravity, but also gouged the magnitude of repercussions, when it comes to today’s ever change lifestyle’s. Besides, its impact on the people is far-reaching indeed.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that some drawbacks the benefits of large shopping malls replacing small shops are indeed too great to ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12037037037 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82276836846 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3501627494 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1666666667 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281157140735 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133056093997 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215837567761 0.071462118173 302% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196555064402 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600123177547 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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