In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it is valuable work experience, important foe learning and taking responsibility. what is your opinion?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals in many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work experience for learning and taking responsibilities has been one the prominent topic in contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the burdens or work experience.
On the one hand, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work such as labor and many more at that type of works are distract students from the studies they do not have time for study. At the end they are not successful in life. Moreover, when they distract from studies they were also lost carrier and depressed in over burden.
On the other hand, if children are do paid work they have a work experience and they do something new in life and they spend money for personal expenditure and help for the parents if they do work they will financial strong and they know that the value of hard money. They should spend money after thinking.
In a nutshell, I am agreed with both sides because children doing paid work they know the value of money but this work is distract students from the studies but they also have work experience
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...n. On the other hand, if children are do paid work they have a work experience a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74885844749 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50741067148 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51598173516 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 379.143842365 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7817459305 50.4703680194 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.555555556 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219187626932 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100793109134 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946318718522 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156967750663 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569837274112 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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