In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other considers it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in every children go to foreign for a study or employment. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments favor of my stance. The most preponderant one in that children are engaged in different kinds of paid work can not only contribute students gain valuable work experience and in life important for learning and taking responsibility but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefit in foreign student not focused on study, total concentration on work, earn money and over burden. The primary one stems from the fact by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today’s ever- changing lifestyle. Besides, it impact on study is far- reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent why many are against children are engaged in different kinds of paid work.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits study in foreign students gain work experience and important for learning and taking responsibility are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0404040404 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8116796614 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8342709636 50.4703680194 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.090909091 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227727917817 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893652449518 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110938045897 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135576141623 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375000941317 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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