The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
In our modern society, mass media plays a significant role in shaping up people's characters and opinions. Mass media includes newspapers, television, internet and so forth. Experts believe that the mass media creates and reflects culture. I firmly assert that mass media plays a vital role in shaping up people's characters and opinions. This essay will discuss how mass media influence people's ideas and attitudes.
There are several reasons why mass media is considered vital in our day-to-day life. Firstly, it helps in fast and instant messaging and provides the ability to connect to the people all over the world. For example, it is evident that people can connect to the rest of the world in a fast manner by using the mass media. Therefore, mass media available to everyone and it can spread the news instantly.
Moreover, the impact of mass media is prominent in communicating and progressing our society. For instance, former American President used social media for their election campaign which yielded a good result. Thus, mass media plays a prominent role in communication
This essay discussed mass media's influence on our society, and how it characterizes our opinion. Mass media transformed the way we communicate in the recent years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...le can connect to the rest of the world in a fast manner by using the mass media. Therefore, mas...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an connect to the rest of the world in a fast manner by using the mass media. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73417209708 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4570063361 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238161883577 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102802581135 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404553342837 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15295898323 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451512002262 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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