The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
In our modern society, mass media plays a significant role in shaping up people's characters and opinions. Mass media includes newspapers, television, internet and so forth. Experts believe that the mass media creates and reflects culture. I firmly assert that mass media plays a vital role in shaping up people's characters and opinions. This essay will discuss how mass media influence people's ideas and attitudes.
There are several reasons why mass media is considered vital in our day-to-day life. Firstly, it helps in fast and instant messaging and provides the ability to connect to the people all over the world. For example, it is evident that people can connect to the rest of the world in a fast manner by using the mass media which is beneficial in many ways. Therefore, mass media available to everyone and it can spread the news instantly.
Moreover, the impact of mass media is prominent in communicating and progressing our political society. For instance, a former political leader who used social media for their election campaign informed that it yielded a good result. Thus, mass media plays a prominent role in communication.
This essay discussed mass media's influence on our society, and how it characterizes our opinion. Mass media transformed the way we communicate in the recent years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fast manner" with adverb for "fast"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...le can connect to the rest of the world in a fast manner by using the mass media which is benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16355140187 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7569182624 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546728971963 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9163686358 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9285714286 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236854227089 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981970328608 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383819581355 0.071462118173 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151103347604 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462462697965 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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