Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion?
The effect of legally responsible for children's act, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of children's activities has sparked the controversy over the potential impact on parents over the years. It can be said that parents should be responsible for their children's activities. This essay will elaborate how parents are responsible for offspring's' activities and how they can control their kids negative activities in society and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why parents should be held accountable for offspring's' activities, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that parents must watch their children's behavior and change it in socially and legally according to rules and regulations, which will help them to grow accordingly. For example, today parents are working and they don't have enough time to teach their kids but its their own responsibility to spend time with kids and guide them in a proper way because children are future of country.
Another justification for upholding the notion is that children spend large amount of time with their parents and learn language, culture and manner, whatever they see in family and try to copy those things, even it is good or bad. For instance, if parents speak in abusive way, children observe and try to imitate the same way. Moreover, if children taking any things from anywhere without permission, it parents responsibility to teach appropriate way so they can learn important lesson. Therefore, parents are legally bound for children's' act.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the influence of children's' activities is prominent, although the way parents should treat their children should not be overlooked.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ple, today parents are working and they dont have enough time to teach their kids bu...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ave enough time to teach their kids but its their own responsibility to spend time ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to spend time with kids and guide them in a proper way because children are future of country....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30662020906 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82711766668 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0348365622 50.4703680194 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427749964863 0.242375264174 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191144727039 0.0925447433944 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105264963488 0.071462118173 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284866229788 0.151781067708 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346251818543 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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