People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about it?
In fast growing urbanization era, people are moving to cities from countryside in an enormous number to have better education, better employment options and many more. And increased the population in cities which also required more resources to service to meet the demand. This essay will discuss why people are migrating to urban areas and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, the first and foremost, agriculture used to be the sole source of bread and butter for several families in rural areas, due to modern agricultural equipment and technologies a person can handle acres of land without any extra helping hand which increases unemployment rate. And eventually people started to migrate to cities to find employment to feed themselves and their family. For example, in the last few decades, in Carolina around 65% population moved to the cities to get jobs. Thus, people moved to cities to find employment, as cities offer them many opportunities.
Furthermore, another reason could be cities have better medical care facilities and better education. In rural areas, people usually die because of lack of medical treatments and medical staffs. People don’t have proper awareness of many diseases and viruses those could harm their health. For instance, in Africa’s rural areas, generally people exposed many deadly viruses, but they don’t have sufficient knowledge and medications to prevent the diseases at first place. Therefore, people migrate to cities for proper medical care and live a healthy life.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that cities have more options, better services and opportunities those attract many people to move into cities and lead a healthy and prosperous life because of that cities became overcrowding and dealing with the shortage of resources to meet the demand of increased population.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43050847458 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78963897442 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.1443142949 50.4703680194 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212963135072 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796781398513 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494860709853 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130644307135 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485022405422 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.