Should government build more roads to allow more vehicle or improve the network of public transport
The importance of the network of public transport by government which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent year. In my opinion, the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that this will ultimately reduce the pollution leave because individual will prefer. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that public transport as their made of accommodation .Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that this significant step will also reduce the traffic on roads and it will be a born for air environment. Hence, it apparent why are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of it will also the government revenue are indeed too great to ignore
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09389671362 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76437729578 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6472413545 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.555555556 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126855206491 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568057264364 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676096981958 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735720735252 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436481194046 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.