Some people argue that science is more important than arts. What is your opinion?
Both science and arts have a played a vital role in human life since the evolution. However, some people believe that science has more importance as compared to arts in the life. This essay will discuss why science has a better role in human life in comparision to arts.
To begin with, development in technology is because of science. With the advancement of technology, there has been significant improvement in the standard of living of people. For example, air conditioned has tremendously made life easier in hotter parts of the world and same goes for the heater in colder regions. Therefore improvement in technology has been beneficial to mankind.
On the other hand, arts can mostly improve the personality of a person. Arts help to grow the imagination of a person in particular but in general it does not bring relief in peoples life as is the case with science. For instance, general people may find a beautiful painting as amusing and in case of the painter, it will display his imaginations only, which may not improve the standard of life for people. Hence, arts is not as beneficial as science.
In conclusion, science can elevate the standard of living of people but arts can further the skills of a person only. In my opinion, science has a far more wider role in peoples life than arts, making it more important than science.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Use only 'wider' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: wider
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81115879828 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70315407297 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510729613734 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3509178431 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2307692308 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.25397266985 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219099599528 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821037171056 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134803193925 0.071462118173 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155763226581 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1493976274 0.0609392437508 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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