Some people believe that academic subjects such as chemistry, physics, and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that practical and theoretical subjects, they both have their significance in a pupils’ life. There has always been a debate among intellectuals on the topic whether students should teach practical subjects or only theoretical subjects. In my opinion, both kinds of subjects have equal importance and this essay will discuss some of the points related to this topic.
Firstly, practical subjects like cooking or mechanical can enable an individual to learn the basic requirements essential to living a life and make students capable of getting the job immediately after the schooling. It has always argued that only practical subjects should teach in schools. This will not only make a student able to get the job but also help them to ease the financial pressure. Thus, teaching practical subjects have their significance in pupil’s lives.
Despite this, theoretical subjects like physics and chemistry also play an essential role as they provide the knowledge about various processes happening around. Without having sufficient information, any individual can imagine these activities as superstitious whereas there is science hidden behind every possible activity of the universe. For example, blinking of eyelids is the sign of stress, but without the knowledge, one can connect this activity to the sign of bad luck. Thus, providing knowledge about these topics is also equally important.
In the end, it can be concluded that both subjects whether they are theoretical based or practical have equal value, and students should teach both kinds of subjects during their academic study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, thus, whereas, for example, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48015873016 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79661132363 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5365390526 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.083333333 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16729612046 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06921200127 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569373629905 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120785403118 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664040840354 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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