Some people believe laws change human behavior. Do you agree with it?
Human behavior has been increasingly changing in the recent years compared to an earlier decade. Enforcing law is the only way to control human attitude to the public. People's opinions differ as to whether or not laws affect human behavior. While there are some strong arguments against the setting of applying the law to control human, I strongly believe that laws alter the attitude of the human. This essay will discuss how the law can change such behavior.
There is a myriad of reasons why law related to human activities. Firstly, the law can control the human emotions although the person wants to commit a crime. As a consequence, people behave according to the law despite having bad intentions. Steve, for example, is considered a good person since he controlled his emotion even when wanted to do some bad things. Thus, most of the people behave according to the laws and legislation.
In addition to controlling human emotion, laws play a significant role in societal change. It is predicted that change in society is a prominent factor for the success of any country. For instance, Australia is considered an excellent country since the laws are applied equally to make the country better.
In conclusion, laws play a vital role in controlling human attitude and change in any country. In my opinion, laws change human behavior, attitude, and belief.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
... to the public. Peoples opinions differ as to whether or not laws affect human behavior. While there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03070175439 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67278772902 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3836342727 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4666666667 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39161662552 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143674664304 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070210287344 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244000896802 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100064338401 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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