Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
Laws are integral part of any group, society and country, it’s basically set of rules and regulations those are required to have harmony and peace in society. Some people think law changes human behaviour. I agree with the notion as laws decrease the crime rate and contribute in betterment of individuals and society. This essay will discuss how law changes human behaviour and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, laws bring discipline in the people lives and also bring the equal freedom to everyone. People need to bear the consequences of obeying and disobeying the laws in their daily lives. Breaking the law would mean trouble, this fear of consequences makes people behave properly in society. For example, earlier “homosexual males” were crime in many countries and now with advancement in law, people are accepting gay members and open about their sexuality. Therefore, the law brings acceptance of others and bring respect for each other.
Furthermore, laws with strict enforcement surely help countries to decrease of crime rates.
In UAE countries, the punishment for rape is directly death penalty for culprit and in some cases culprit also hand over to the masses to decide their punishment. Rehabilitation centers are there to help victims to start life again. Due to such harsh punishment, rape cases are very minimal in the UAE and even people do not dare to commit such heinous crimes. Thus, there is a direct link between law and people behaviour.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that laws have direct impact on daily lives of people and definitely changes people behaviour. In my opinion, laws bring more discipline in individual and in country and bring equal freedom to everyone irrespective of their gender, age and class.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21160409556 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75555793115 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2908278835 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281223227128 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106497118311 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118680537024 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145921719176 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829895253105 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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