“Vegetarianism is a more ethical practice than eating meat.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your experience or observations.
Vegetarianism has become increasingly popular in recent times. People often choose to become vegetarian because it is considered to be more ethical than being a meat eater. This essay will discuss the reasons why vegetarianism is in fact, a much more ethical practice when compared to eating meat.
Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat because it does not harm animals. Clearly, harming animals causes suffering, which is unethical. For example, millions of chickens are killed each day for human consumption. Vegetarians do not participate in the killing of animals, which is a much more ethical practice than eating meat.
Vegetarianism is much more ethical than eating meat because its impact on the environment is far less. Growing vegetable is good for the environment, whereas farming animals impact the environment. Beef cattle, for instance, destroy topsoil and damage the atmosphere. Vegetarianism is a more ethical practice because it does not harm the natural world.
This essay discussed why vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat because it does not harm animals and it does not damage the environment. In my opinion, vegetarianism is a far more ethical practice than eating meat. In the future, I believe, more people will become vegetarians.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 31.9359605911 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39800995025 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97780208622 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 139.433497537 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5177986161 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265931469226 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117687959402 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943641711069 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199093674093 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416466400961 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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