Why can some people cannot balance their professional and personal life? Do you think it is important to balance these two lives?
one of the most conspicuous trends of todays world is a colossal upsurge in which some people cannot balance their professional and personal life. Meanwhile, there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in ones life. However, i do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay.
there are number of arguments in favour of my stance. The mst preponderant one is that people cannot balance their professional and personal life. this can not only contribute to lives but also lead to many benefits in varous feilods. thanks to the wide range of andvantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, effacy,and convenience Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as argumenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication, and preservance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of people cannot balance their lives.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of balance their personal and professional lives are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06147540984 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79918932865 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5846405807 50.4703680194 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339629132761 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142815869127 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137101878228 0.071462118173 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216488437042 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390263907741 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.