Which leader is important for u. Explain why with reasons and examples.
The leader who comes to my mind and very important is Mahatma Gandhi. He is a leader who brought a significant change for India and changed the people's thought all over the world towards injustice. His original name is Mohan Dash Karam Chand Gandhi. The nonviolence movement leaded by him and his teachings of the power of the truth are the most significant impacts upon my country India. He is a role model for many indian youth since his non- violence movements was a huge success for bringing India's independence.
First and foremost, Mahatma Gandhi is important for me because ...
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Sentence: He is a very influential example for the youth all over the world, who has never quited the side of truth and at the same time he was a owner of enormous victory not for himself but for his country and its people.
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