"Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment."
Task: Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The governing of a people is as complex as it is seeming straightforword. One method along cannot solve the problems officials meet in the office. It is also for this same reason of diversified solutions that there are more than one official in the governemt. The first part of the prompt alludes to government officials doing what the people clamour about. I do mostly agree with this, as often, people ask for their basic right, which they shouldn't be reprimanded from exercising, this is on the premise that these requests are rational. I do however concede that people's request can be impossible to meet verbatim and must be reevaluated. In this case, the officials should base off these decisions on their own judgement, as long as these judgement is fair. I wil be addressing my stance in two main strategies.
Firstly, let's take democracy for instance. Democracy is thw government by the people, and for the people. Practicing this type of governance tells that officials should do what the people are infact requesting. What are these request? They are their basic rights, such as availability of clean water, availability of affordable energy, and even swearing in of a majorly voted official. The 2023 Presidential election in Nigeria saw the application of the opposite of what is said to be practiced, 'Democracy'. Peopel came out to exercise their rights as voters, the results were to be announced transparently. But what played out was far from Democracy. People were threaten to vote a particulate candidate against thier will, ballot boxes were stolen and altered, results were npt broadcasted fairly, and of course, the people for whom all these were done was sworn in. What was the result? Riots all over Nigeria ensured, shops were and businesses were runined, to say the least. Thus, in not adhering with the people's choice of vote, the very peace fabric of a Nation can be shred.
Secondly, in Nigeria, the people request for access to health amenities, which again is thier right. A lie is however told that '20 billion naira' has been scheduled for the building of good hospitals. Not long after, the same money is said to have been swallowed by snake (a riduculous story to play on the intelligence of the people). What was the resulting effec? Increased motality rate, people leaving the country for a better place, and a sick popolation
I do concede with the believe of other people however that government officials should make decisions based their judgement for this reason. Indeed, the people's choice might not be rational, might be meeting only immediate needs, or even be just personal. For example, in the case of Energy inavailability in Nigeria for example. Due to the consistency with no light, Nigerians have fallen to the state pf just wanting light, in whatever form and price, regardless of its effect to the environment. With the advent of climate change, the people still believe that this is the problem of the global north, and it doesn't concern or affect them. This shows how due to lack, people's wants can be irrational. In this situation, a true government official should not verbatim agree with these needs, but should rather think of ways to make energy accessible to all, and safe for the environment.
Conclusively, the needs of the people should infact be adhered to, but in providing this need, the method should be accessed for the best strategy in achieving and not just thinking of the immediate relief. It is thus the job of the officail to understand the people's wants, be transparent with them about how this would be met, and be futuristic about meeting it, and of course, doing it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ls doing what the people clamour about. I do mostly agree with this, as often, pe...
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Line 1, column 541, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...emise that these requests are rational. I do however concede that peoples request...
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Line 1, column 738, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this judgement' or 'these judgements'?
Suggestion: this judgement; these judgements
...ions on their own judgement, as long as these judgement is fair. I wil be addressing my stance ...
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Line 1, column 763, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...nt, as long as these judgement is fair. I wil be addressing my stance in two main...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this request' or 'these requests'?
Suggestion: this request; these requests
... people are infact requesting. What are these request? They are their basic rights, such as a...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun naira seems to be countable, so consider using: 'billion nairas'.
Suggestion: billion nairas
...er right. A lie is however told that 20 billion naira has been scheduled for the building of ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... better place, and a sick popolation I do concede with the believe of other pe...
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Line 7, column 891, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to all, and safe for the environment. Conclusively, the needs of the people sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 46.0 19.5258426966 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3034.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 618.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90938511327 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68207873859 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 309.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 929.7 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 15.0 4.99550561798 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1131285493 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9393939394 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240321619864 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603267276838 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618668758632 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137091632804 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712955252011 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.