The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The bar charts illustrate the use of water for various purposes, including industry, agriculture and domestics. The data is collected in six regions, namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia.
Overall, most areas tend to utilize water for agricultural purpose, except North America and Europe, where water is primarily used for industrial manufacture.
It is recognizable that the developing areas, featuring Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America utilize a huge amount of water, with Central Asia taking the lead position. Specifically, 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% of water are consumed for agriculture at those areas respectively. In contrast, while South America consumes 19% of water for industry, the other three areas only spend a small percentage of water (under 10%) in that sector.
Despite the patterns of water consumption in developing areas, North America and Europe show an opposite trend. Around half of the amount of water consumption at these regions are used for industry, while agricultures at the aforementioned regions account for 39% and 32% of the water consumption, respectively.
With the given data, water consumption at household level in six areas is left with a minor proportion.
In sum, there is a different in the pattern of water used in the developing and developed areas. The amount of water spend on a particular sector depends on the economic development of that areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'utilizes'.
Suggestion: utilizes
...rica, South East Asia and South America utilize a huge amount of water, with Central As...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30042918455 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88072045692 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519313304721 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4022924971 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29432330748 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125281385801 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064543080257 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158638105993 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325208020781 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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