The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The pictures illustrate the process and equipment of cement manufacture and the production of concrete for building purposes using cement.

Overall, cement is made using 4 main equipment and the manufacturing process consists of 5 various stages. Also, It requires 4 different materials to produce concrete.

Looking at the diagram in more detail, we can see that at the first step in the production of cement, limestone and clay are crushed in the crusher. Next, this powder is mixed and then the resulting mixture is put in a rotating heater before being put in a grinder, which turns the mixture into cement. Finally, the cement is packed into bags.

Turning to the process of concrete manufacture, gravel, sand, cement, and water is mixed together. To be specific, gravel (small stones) take up the largest proportion, at 50%, while the percentages of sand, cement, and water were 25%, 15%, and only 10%, respectively. At the final stage, all four materials are put in a concrete mixer.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04848484848 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72129985686 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0970767534 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364798421549 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150882053297 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145926564675 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253664618127 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161935637546 0.0819641961636 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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