The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The given pictures illustrate how cement is made and then how cement is used in concrete production for construction purposes.

Overall, the process begins with crushing a mixture of limestone and clay and a chemical transformation, followed by bagging the obtained cement, before it is then combined with other materials to create concrete.

The process of creating cement commences when limestone and clay are put together into a crusher to get powder before being placed in a circular mixer. In the next stage, the mixture is then connected to a rotating heater with heat provided for a chemical transformation and it is then ground to produce  cement for bagging.

The process proceeds to concrete manufacturing, the obtained production in the aforementioned process is put into concrete mixer with different materials including water, sand and gravel. Each component is measured before mixing with 15% for cement, 10% for water and the proportion of sand and gravel accounted for 25% and 50% respectively. 

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...rmation and it is then ground to produce  cement for bagging. The process proce...
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... accounted for 25% and 50% respectively. 
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36645962733 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03644770413 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7833883223 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290162030674 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15054331042 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932241830334 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189675117653 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997792293299 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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