If people could choose between a life without work and spending most of their time working,they could always choose not to work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary life, there are many people busy with their working and spending time too much for working. Therefore, if they have a chance between a life without work and spending all time for working, they always choose first choice. Personally, I’m not agree with this argument, this statement has some benefits but it’s potentially coexist.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of people always choose a life without working. First, government subsidies for living and spending time for their life are believed to equalize working opportunities among young people regardless of their background family. In addition, people want to spend their time for other things because they believed that is the best way to enjoy their life and that is a happily life. This without working support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall tourism rate of wealthy people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, people always choose a life without work because they have a comfortable feeling and they can do many things they want in daily basis, this can be a difficult things if they always spending time for working. In fact, it is acknowledged that comfortable and environment human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, there are some problems if all people do that and other reasons for people spending time for working. First, people not working would likely correspond with a financial tremendous strains in country. Generating no income from working and workers, companies could become over-reliant on the state budget for funding, meaning that there would be less input to develop other important areas such as healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Second, there are some reason why other people choose spending time for working. They want to earn more money is an important things but also some people spending time working because that is their passion, dreams and hobbies, therefore they never want to give up and spending time for working also their favorite thing. This spending time working would probably result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. It, instead, would be a more working viable option if the resources were focused on supporting employees and make some vacations for workers.
In conclusion, this statement has some negative and positive impacts. In my point of view, that is not really true for all people, it depends on each person’s goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...always choose first choice. Personally, I’m not agree with this argument, this st...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there are some reasons'?
Suggestion: there are some reasons
...m and transport infrastructure. Second, there are some reason why other people choose spending time f...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to spend'.
Suggestion: to spend
...are some reason why other people choose spending time for working. They want to earn mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26150121065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63510796878 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491525423729 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9578414097 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.722222222 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408148898148 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141935622953 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101602756908 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248673674994 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145891486564 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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