In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think is a positive or negative situation?
Providing a secure accommodation is one of the most challenges for the residents of all countries. I am strongly inclined to take the side of owning a home instead of renting one based on several reasons. Firstly, owning a home is a type of proliferating investment. Secondly, owning a home provides a comfortable condition for the family and the last reason is that a home will be a perfect and secure heritage for the next generations. To elaborate more on my tendency, the following reasons and examples will be mentioned.
First and foremost, when people are investing in purchasing homes, they are completely aware that the value of their investments increases gradually. In other words, When I buy home, I am sure that the instant value of my property would not decrease. Therefore, by owning a home, I maintain the value of my property. The economic investigations have correctly proved this fact that for all countries of the world, even in those that had gone through calamity (such as war, natural disasters, etc.,), the value of the real estates has not decreased permanently. As a result, if someone wants to keep the actual value of his/her money, owning a home is a good strategy.
Another primary reason is attributed to the comfortable conditions that someone provides for his/her family. When you rent a home, you might encounter some issues with your landlord. In addition, you should commit to your contract details and some of your freedom might be decreased. Moreover, with respect to the annual inflation, the cost of renting home gradually increases and each year, the tenants should bring more money for the landlords to keep their contract. This leads to stress on the family members and might cause inconvenience for their accommodation. Therefore, owning a home prevents external concerns.
The final advantage of owning a home is making a sustained heritage for the next generations. Regarding the importance of the parent role to be responsible for their children, having a home has several advantages. First, the children are growing in the place without external stress. The parents would assign more time for their education. Second, owning a place will be good investment for their future. On the other hand, when people rent a home, they might also have challenge for the accommodation of their children’s family. Thus, owning a home would be a secure investment for them
To recapitulate, I remarkably agree that owning home outweighs renting one base on keeping value of own property, providing a comfortable condition for the family and being responsible for the future of the next generation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ges for the residents of all countries. I am strongly inclined to take the side o...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...creases gradually. In other words, When I buy home, I am sure that the instant va...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ually. In other words, When I buy home, I am sure that the instant value of my pr...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... decrease. Therefore, by owning a home, I maintain the value of my property. The ...
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Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...ity such as war, natural disasters, etc.,, the value of the real estates has not d...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e investment for them To recapitulate, I remarkably agree that owning home outwe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90231954987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479262672811 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0813434772 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6956521739 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65217391304 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305317985586 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094796917253 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056960672694 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186600060449 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441921992889 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ges for the residents of all countries. I am strongly inclined to take the side o...
^
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...creases gradually. In other words, When I buy home, I am sure that the instant va...
^
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ually. In other words, When I buy home, I am sure that the instant value of my pr...
^
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... decrease. Therefore, by owning a home, I maintain the value of my property. The ...
^
Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...ity such as war, natural disasters, etc.,, the value of the real estates has not d...
^^
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e investment for them To recapitulate, I remarkably agree that owning home outwe...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90231954987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479262672811 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0813434772 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6956521739 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.65217391304 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305317985586 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094796917253 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056960672694 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186600060449 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441921992889 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.