Rapid population growth in cities has brought with it many problems. What are these problems? How can the quality of life of city residents be maintained?
Population growth has become one of the most worrying problems in the contemporary world due to the detrimental effects it has on humans and nature. This essay will shed light on the downsides of this phenomenon and put forward some possible solutions to deal with it.
Admittedly, the increasing population presents a number of issues. First, when the global population rises rapidly, there will be higher demands for accommodation. Meanwhile, land resource on earth is becoming scarce, leading to increasing house prices. As a result, many people face difficulties in looking for a place to live. Second, owing to overpopulation, the number of private vehicles also increased. This also means that a huge amount of carbon footprint will be disposed into the environment. This may potentially have adverse impacts on not only human health but also wildlife. Moreover, population explosions may result in fierce competition for job opportunities, giving rise to unemployment rates.
To alleviate the problem, actions should be taken. One possible solution is for governments to invest in urban planning schemes such as constructing more residential blocks. This may hopefully deal with house shortage and homelessness. Another practical approach is to develop and upgrade transportation systems such as railways, subways, and buses. Not only does it encourage people to use more public transport but also reduces pollution. Additionally, people’s awareness about safe sex practices should be raised while at the same time, local authorities need to encourage their residents to apply birth control methods. These may potentially prevent unplanned pregnancies and therefore reduce birth rates.
All things considered, overpopulation causes various social issues regarding lack of accommodation, pollution, and unemployment. If the governments take action by allocating budget for housing, public transportation, and birth control policies, citizens’ most basic needs will be ensured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75254237288 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15517295023 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1595571731 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3157894737 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117131544042 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034421435112 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408595340822 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666420366331 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312468425042 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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