Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?
These days many people have become concerned about intelligence measurements. Some believes that success is the ideal indicator, while others think that there are other factors. This essay will show that intelligence can be measured in many different ways, and not one by itself. The essay will discuss first the role that success play in measuring intelligence, afterwards it will discuss wether it’s the answer.
To begin with, success is an easy way for measuring and promoting intelligence. More and more geniuses are being seen reaching their top achivments in both academic and professional baths. In addition, these accomplishments made it easy to point fingers towards their brilliance. For example, Prof. Majdi Yaqoub has become one of the leading doctors worldwide. His educational researchs have been published in most of the high tier universities. In the mean time, his work is saving a lot everyday.
Secondly, being on top could be a way to recognize people, but it’s not about measuring how good they are. Some got lucky to hear the claps, while others were not. That doesn’t decide wether they’re intellegent or not. For exmple, a recent study from Oxford University showed that almost seventy percent of well potentialed people didn’t get the chance to succeed. This could be due to their financial status or some other circumstances. Furthermore, it’s a bit tricky to seprate lucky ones, from smart ones.
To sum up, success indeed make intellagence shine. On the other hand, it’s not a fully effective way to measure it. In my opinion, many intellegents didn’t get the chance. And while sucess can be considered a practical example, and might give credit to intellegence, yet it’s not the only way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19858156028 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81947676402 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5725411458 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8095238095 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388355919218 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882816084619 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892360773518 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208642166304 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906058846134 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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