Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
suggest someone who deserves the reward.
mention what they have done to help the community.
say what reward you would like to give this person.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reference to the recent advertisement in your newspaper regarding award for community related service. It is important on my part to make you aware about my English teacher, Mr. Sanjay Sharma who I believe is perfectly suitable to receive this prestigious and auspicious award.
Using his spare time in the evenings, he has shown tremendous results to clean city’s beaches and ponds from all sorts of garbage. His efforts have completely changed the landscape in southern part of the city and has resulted in increased number of tourists. Not only he has removed solid waste from the southern stretch but also has ensured 24 hours surveillance across the beach with help of police department. In addition, this effort would help aquatic animals and preserve the overall environment in the city.
As a token of thanks and further to encourage his good work, Cash reward and a free advertisement campaign to find him volunteers would be best award which can be given to him. Importantly, It would speed up the cleanliness drive across the district which he intends to launch next month. Further, this shall motivate him further to continue to achieve and scale heights.
Thank you for kind consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Kumar
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-17 | SATPREET SINGH | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this prestigious and auspicious award. Using his spare time in the evenings, he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18660287081 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79284063136 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698564593301 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3019140668 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5454545455 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103059216008 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352747720271 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231502371635 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484347406784 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148032133167 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.