What is the best invention of last 100 years, computer, antibiotics, airplane, and explain why.
There is an ongoing debate among people about the best invention in last 100 years. While it is
possible to claim that invention of antibiotics has the most significant impact, my view is that
advantages of antibiotics invention outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall explain my
point of view by analyzing the arguments in support for it.
There are several reasons why antibiotics has the most impact on people's life. One of them is that
it gave a huge control over several deadly diseases across the globe. It can also be argued that
antibiotic medicine helps saving life of thousands of people in the world. It should also be taken
into account that it facilitates patients recovery faster from various types of infections due to
viruses.
Those who argue for other inventions have a different view and say that they are equally good.
Firstly, it is claimed that computer has the most impact over other inventions.Then, there are
concerns about computers destructive usage as well. For example, computers use in nuclear bombs
could wipe out the world in few seconds.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that antibiotic invention
is the most constructive invention till date.I would strongly recommend and give higher marks to
the invention of antibiotics over any other invention in any other field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13716814159 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72069208118 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3984813468 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.545454545 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134715029676 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508088977566 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845881840364 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0446932456885 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718288072253 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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