In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Over the last decade, obesity issues are widely spread out due to enormous technological progress all over the world. This essay will consider the main reasons, and then outline possible remedies.
Perhaps the major physical problems are sedentary lifestyle, which have been encouraged by video games or TV. Thus, teenagers may incline to the problem with weight. In addition, excessive use of smartphones can be the result of strain on eyes, meaning that individuals from the childhood may suffer from poor vision. Balanced diet goes on the second plan, accounted for the unhealthy food. Therefore, there are a lot of physical disadvantages.
The most alarming phychological impact of above mentioned activities is possible the risk of addiction, meaning that children are unable to communicate with family or peers in real life.
With regards to the possible solution, promoting a healthy lifestyle through sport programmes which have been broadcoasted on TV, is the first step to restrict obesity issues. Furthermore, the state by establishing bicycle parks, skateboard parks or street workouts with an enormous kind of various equipments may allow people to lead a healthy and sporty lifestyle. This could be done through sponsorship for sport activities such as public competition (mapathones), where for the top places the government encouraged winners by gifts and so on. Hence, if sport champions or famous people speak out about these dangers, the message will be effectively not only for individuals with overweight, but for children too.
To sum up, the risks posed by excessive using of technologies are directly connected to the unhealthy lifestyle and the possibility of being hook on certain activities such as playing video games or watching TV. Possible answers might involve strongers facts about the dangers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42657342657 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8522554483 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7329322945 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0601417132932 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0198072921604 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251920316553 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0255840050849 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250356808706 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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