The chart below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Asbhy) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The provided pie chart represents the proportion of inhabitant aged 23-65 in various constitutes in one UK urban area (Asbhy) and in the UK as a whole in the year 2008.
As can be observed by the pie charts, residents in two figures account for a vast proportion in both Personal Services and Office Work sector. In details, in the UK, the highest proportion of Office Work was in 2008 with 19%. It is notable that, Unemployed and Construction shared the same percentage of 17%. With regards to Asbhy, the proportion of Office Work was highest in 2008 with 21% while the lowest percentage of Professional Wok was in 2008 with 8%.
Attention should be drawn to similarities between two figures. In particular, Professional Wok in two figures shared the same percentage of 10%. Besides, Office Work in both Asbhy and the UK were similar to 18% and 19% in the other given.
- It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- The line chart shows the total spending of five different categories, in percentage, in a European country from 1960 to 2000 61
- It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- The chart below show the percentage of people aged 23 65 in different occupations in one UK town Asbhy and in the UK as a whole in 2008 73
- It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72549019608 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75150202282 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5744104532 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23640293873 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101098913459 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127608040722 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200108786345 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154802648753 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.