Why do you think people attend the colleges or university?
Each year, they enrolled the thousand students with many countries. However, some students do not know why they should choose learning in universities or colleges because of wasting time. They can have many ways to be successful but universities or colleges is the shortest way to become that and they can learns or improve some skills which they have known before.
If people want to succeed fast, they should attend universities. In the universities, people can learn lots of knowledge that had researched. After students completed their program, they should get the certification which prove of your knowledge have enough to work in companies. Not only students can learn knowledge, but also they can learn more benefit experience of the older people. Therefore, they use these experience in their work and their life.
Besides students can learn lectures and experiences, they will get some skills. In the university, students make some small groups which work specific activities such as dance group, social group, communicate group, etc. These groups usually perform some activities likely going camping to improve the soft skills in students or work in groups to perform the event, that is the way to help people make the experience in their major or another, they will improve the working group which the important skill in the future. Presentation is also the good method to improve the soft skills. It help student to become convenience, and know how to show their selves.
University and college is not the only one method the make the success, but it the best method to make success shortest and fast. Because of the knowledge, experience and skills learnt in the university, they can apply there into the job easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Each year, they enrolled the thousand st...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...ents do not know why they should choose learning in universities or colleges because of ...
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Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...hortest way to become that and they can learns or improve some skills which they have ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...skills which they have known before. If people want to succeed fast, they sho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ience in their work and their life. Besides students can learn lectures and ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...heir work and their life. Besides students can learn lectures and experie...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...d method to improve the soft skills. It help student to become convenience, and know...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and know how to show their selves. University and college is not the only o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10877192982 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59012020646 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480701754386 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7560224766 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102143009187 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415247098849 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657853951983 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700579629667 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445403725654 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.