Your friend from an English-speaking country will come to your city for a holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
• invite him to stay with you
.introduce some places to visit
.give him some advice
Hey Daniel
Hope, you are doing good in London!!!! When I read your letter last week, I was overwhelmed as you are coming to my place during your holiday in India. I am penning this epistle to tell you about your stay, places we are going to visit and essential things that you should bring while travelling to Shimla.
First of all, I am not going to listen anything as you are going to stay with me at my home. My family will be really happy if you live with us when you will be in Shimla. Also, there are many places to visit in Shimla. The main place is The Ridge, from here you can admire the beauty of the place by viewing mountains, trees and the small houses which are built by cutting the slopes of the hills. Moreover, there is a church, Jakhu temple as well as Indian Institute of Science and Research.
If you want to buy traditional wears then we will go to Mall road and also there are many restaurants where you can taste the different varieties of food. More important than all, you should bring couple of warm clothes and boots because the time when you are travelling to Shimla will be very cold. So, be prepared before coming.
Eagerly waiting for you to pay a visit at my place. It is being a long time that I have not seen you.
Give my love to your children!!!!!!!
Yours truly
Watson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34274193548 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20519544864 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4221234434 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30856960782 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109264071065 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812500910306 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174865865093 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868599149713 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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