Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...gh many think this is a true statement, i think this is not the right idea. I fee...
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... this way for the two main reasons that i will explore on the following essay. ...
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...following essay. First of all, people should always know how to enjoy their l...
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...e should always know how to enjoy their life at any age , many people find alway...
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...know how to enjoy their life at any age , many people find always many ways to e...
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...oy their life at any age , many people find always many ways to entertain their life, my ...
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...t any age , many people find always many ways to entertain their life, my own exp...
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...experience is compelling example of this . When i was 18 years old i was obsessed ...
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...ample of this . When i was 18 years old i was obsessed going to party and make ne...
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... important things in life thinking that its the time to enjoy life, at that period ...
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...s the time to enjoy life, at that period my dad came and about my studies and fut...
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...dad came and about my studies and future and i told him thats my golden age and i...
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...me and about my studies and future and i told him thats my golden age and its th...
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...t my studies and future and i told him thats my golden age and its the right time to...
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... and i told him thats my golden age and its the right time to enjoy life, but he co...
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...m they way to be happy. For that reason i was convinced that the pleasure of life...
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...nd on the age of the person. Secondly , i strongly believe that old people can ...
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...ve that old people can enjoy their life equally as young onces . For instance , i look som...
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... enjoy their life equally as young onces . For instance , i look sometimes to my g...
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...fe equally as young onces . For instance , i look sometimes to my grandparents lif...
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...equally as young onces . For instance , i look sometimes to my grandparents life ...
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...ually as young onces . For instance , i look sometimes to my grandparents life m despite they ...
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...joying her activities, in addition when i go with my uncle to see him play golf a...
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...erson. I took the idea from my dad when i was much more younger then now and the ...
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...ok the idea from my dad when i was much more younger then now and the way my grand parents l...
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...e idea from my dad when i was much more younger then now and the way my grand parents live m...
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...rom my dad when i was much more younger then now and the way my grand parents live m...
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...rom my dad when i was much more younger then now and the way my grand parents live m...
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...ss and pleasure never die with childhood .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29484029484 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07982563059 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452088452088 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0607626252 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9166666667 20.6045352989 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238984525122 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103507676689 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829559819047 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158602133241 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415722494497 0.0645574589148 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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