Nowadays there is an increased in garbage production in almost every household around the world. Many concerned citizens are worried about this alarming trend, and there is a call on every individual to creatively import solutions up to the challenge. Our lifestyle is a trigger of this large production, but big corporations also have a role in the way packages are produced, therefore both have to change as soon as possible.
As a starting point of our discussion, let us examine the causes of such serious consequence. Specially in urban areas, citizens are constantly running everywhere, therefore they need to eat fast. The main problem with this behaviour, is that fast food come in packages, so in all meals we need to throw away something. Furthermore, most of the material used by big companies are made of plastic, because is more profitable, but it can take centuries before it can be degraded. Analysing this problem is important, but that should not be the end of the discussion.
Despite the issues already explained, there are a few solutions we could endeavour to undertake. To clarify this, we shall focus ways that promote changes of behaviour and what companies can do to contribute positively. For example, some marketing campaigns should be done, promoting the use of products without packages, as fruits or vegetables, changing this way, the consumer habits. Finally, and more importantly, corporations must change the materials of their packages from plastic to a biodegradable ones, as mushroom or hemp based products. These are positive changes that would help to reduce the amount of rubbish produced.
In summary, there is definitely a huge problem in our society with the excess utilization of plastic in the food industry, but if some alternative biodegradable products are used, and if media gets involved in this problem, there is still hope for change in the near future.
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- Some people think that teenagers who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adult criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in English who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 200 and 2010. 33
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...ackages from plastic to a biodegradable ones, as mushroom or hemp based products. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91388991519 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612179487179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7405513538 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186723061312 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594051955259 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681091286469 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937498704844 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740490904572 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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