International travelers can cause problems to the countries to which they travel.On the other hand, international travelers can bring real advantages with them. Are the problem international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?
International tourism has always been the hot topic among countries and draw lots of criticism and accolades. Overseas tourists bring both benefits and dis-benefits to visiting countries. I shall explain the same in the essay.
On the one hand, international travelers are considered money bank as they help to boost the economy of the country. When international tourists come to country for excursion, visit historical places, medical reasons etc., different connecting industries get developed and lots of money come in circulation, resulting upward trend in overall economy. For instance, in India 20% foreigners visited the state of Rajasthan and state’s local economy grew by 38%. Furthermore, by opening such industries, local people get an employment opportunity which ultimately helps to lift their standard of living. Moreover, people find it a chance to interact with the travelers and get to know about their countries and exchange the cultural knowledge.
On the other hand, some people see it as disturbing movement owing to various reasons. First and foremost, foreigners do not know the laws and cultural or religious boundary and sometimes offend the local people by their behavior. Lots of western people for example visit Dubai which is famous for sandy beaches, provoke the religious clergy for now wearing appropriate dresses at public places. Secondly, in some countries, law and order situation is not reasonably good and native people cheat the tourists which not only defame the countries name but also increase the tension between countries. Finally, some nations have prejudices against other nations and local people treat the other’s nation’s people differently which sometimes creates tussle between countries.
To sum-up, in globalized world, international tourism is a blessing as it offers so many advantages like economy boom, job creation, vast exposure of different cultures. I believe that disadvantages of international meagre and can be resolved through awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61437908497 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94620485194 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630718954248 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6934603343 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.533333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179678844714 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058175570795 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621826799036 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103927266301 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044279438565 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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