Question: You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
what was the item .
why it was important that you get it immediately.
what you suggest the company should do now.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I ordered the anniversary cake on 12th October 2018 which was supposed to be delivered next day. However, Cake is yet to be delivered.
While ordering the cake from website, it was clearly mentioned that within one day, it will be delivered with extra charges of ten dollars. I placed the online order at 10:00 am one day before my anniversary, considering it will be delivered on next day i.e. 13th October 2018. I wanted to surprise my wife by presenting the cake to her but it all messed up by your unprofessional service. Moreover, I was embarrassed in small party too hosted by my wife where guests were curiously waiting for cake.
Since my special day got ruined by your unprofessional delivery, I do not need the cake now. Therefore, I ask for not only the cake price but also the penalty for not honoring the commitment. I request you to take a decision in this regard by next Friday and credit money in my bank account. I am enclosing the receipt for your verification.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely
Jumbo
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Comments
Hi all my name is Mary
Hi all my name is Mary
I am new here and would like to say thanks for having me.
I run A Waltzers Hire in the United Kingdom.
If your interested get in touch.
See You Later
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I ordere...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g the receipt for your verification. I look forward to hearing from you. Your...
^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to hearing from you. Your sincerely Jumbo
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60512820513 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72749171316 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7810965524 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176208518577 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625406997189 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715639101963 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124467321053 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527490859595 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.