Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that quality is dominant than quantity. Contrary to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that Today's, the watchful people do not find any opportunity for success. In the modern lifestyle, just persons can remain those who can adapt themselves to fast rate outputs. I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that we can sacrifice quality for more quickly outcome.
First and foremost, yet still having good quality is more important than the amount of an outcome. For example, most of famous cellphone producer company demonstrate one new model in each year. But some new company with the aim of competing with this old company distribution several models in each year with lower price to can attract costumers with their products. But, the result is quite inverse because the users of this new products occasionally find some mistake and error in this cellphones and writing some reports from their experience in some commercial websites. Countsicuently, this company lost the confidence of people and can not remain in the market for a long time.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that sometimes the careless to some issue has an unrecoverable result. For example, several years ago. One construction company got the allow of building a dam in a dry region in my country because this company claimed that can complete this project with more speed than other volunteer company. They did not do perfect research and study about the place of establishing dam because of force to start constructing phase. The result was a disaster because they build a dam on the high salty ground and this mistake led to all of arriving water of the river to dam became salty and unusable. this careless created an environmental calamity. Unfortunately all of the tries for reviving this problem face with deadlock.
Finally, yet importantly, in a whole view, carefully caused to increase in the rate of progress outcome. Because of we needless to rebound and spending a lot of time for finding and solving the problem in the future
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that work slowly and make sure that everything is correct is the best way for increasing rate of development and success. because through that we save more time and exhibit high-quality result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...sionally find some mistake and error in this cellphones and writing some reports fro...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...years ago. One construction company got the allow of building a dam in a dry region in my...
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Line 3, column 666, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...river to dam became salty and unusable. this careless created an environmental calam...
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Line 3, column 729, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n environmental calamity. Unfortunately all of the tries for reviving this problem face wi...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'Because we' instead.
Suggestion: Because we
...crease in the rate of progress outcome. Because of we needless to rebound and spending a lot ...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...easing rate of development and success. because through that we save more time and exhi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, still, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9898989899 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69288079552 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0249029591 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114556401789 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323005106432 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407943768209 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718492145304 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638071367114 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.