Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that Internet is one unseparatable part of our world. Apporocsimately, we cannot find any works or services that do not depend on computers and Internet. Anyone know that Internet provide huge amount of information for all of people and make relationshipe between people very easily than it was before that the Internet arrive to our life. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that this kind of accessability to information can create a lot of problems and threatend for people. I, to agreat extent agree with this idea that Internet is one of best inventtion of recent centary and its advantage is very higher than its disadvantage.
First and foremost, we cannot find any new invention that it has not any error or problems. Even one of best helpful things somtimes could create problems and in my opinion the advantage and disadvantage of anythings just related to how we used from this things. For example, some people have this idea that access to the Internet led to children have access to some information that maybe these were not suit for their age or even create some damage to them. But, it is clear that if people have enough awareness about how they used from Internet and have uptodate information about theatend that may be could provide problem for them thaey can avoid from this unfortunate happens.
On another significant fact that should be taken into the consideration is that the ways for avoiding or limiting the threatend about Internet developed aline with expantion of Internet between people. Today, we know that there are a lot of progarms and softwords that produced for safety of computers from Internet Viruoses. All of big and famus computer compnes like Google and Macrosoft in each year provide a lot of firewalls for chompin with computer Virous.
Finnally, yet importantly, access to Internet led to huge development in all aspect of life and science and bussines, by increasing the mass and rate for transportation and sharing datas. Surely, without access to Internet we live in completely different world.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above , I am convinced that Internet benefites are out of its disadvantages. Because it improve all aspects of our life.
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- In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 90
- TPO44-Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are relate 80
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- Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades. Although there have been successful manned missions to the Moon in the 1960s and 1970s, Mars is 150 times further away from Earth than the Moon is. Thus the projec 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...epend on computers and Internet. Anyone know that Internet provide huge amount of in...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...epend on computers and Internet. Anyone know that Internet provide huge amount of in...
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Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... First and foremost, we cannot find any new invention that it has not any error or problems. ...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...has not any error or problems. Even one of best helpful things somtimes could create pr...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...things just related to how we used from this things. For example, some people have t...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aspect of life and science and bussines, by increasing the mass and rate for tran...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he basis of reasons that mentioned above , I am convinced that Internet benefites ...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...benefites are out of its disadvantages. Because it improve all aspects of our life.
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improves'?
Suggestion: improves
...re out of its disadvantages. Because it improve all aspects of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01846965699 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74987282506 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530343007916 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8916971986 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222942397813 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689479667351 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429095387949 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112412221386 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528859411798 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.