Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that because of modern lifestyle parents working hard and most of the time is busy, so it is important that children find the way that spends this time happier. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that it is better for children to fulling their free time with some extra homework and more practice for their lessons. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that children should be having fun things instead of the time they should be spent with their parents.
First and foremost, to decrease the bad effect of do not the presence of parents beside of their children, we should find some useful activity to decline children upset. Children naturally need to the physical presence of parents. they need parent embraced them, playing with them and going with their parents to their favorite place. But unfortunately, they lost all of this enjoyments. Thus, it is very important to get some kind and attractive things as replace. Psychologist, substantiated that children who deprived of sufficient meeting of their parents are at high risk of depression. In addition, it is important that usually the time which children spend with their parents, are separated from their study time so the additional pressure for schoolwork is unreasonable.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that social activity. All of us even very young children or adult people need to the relationship with others especially our favorite people. Therefore, if children who are deprived of their parents, forced to do some boring activity and captived them at the home led to irreversible harm to them. In this condition, some activities, for example, sports or playing with their friends are the good alternative for them. Because the relationship with friends is very helpful for improvement of the social ability of them.
Finally, yet importantly, children who stay at the home for the longtime alone or with just a carrier are more possibility to prone to some wrong things. Today, most of the children are very easy to access the internet. Thus, without regulating of parents it can be a potential threat for young low experience children. Consequently, it is better to they spend their time with other children in a safe and suitable environment.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that the best way for planing children alone time is some community activities. Because they should have the happy time and live in the positive environment to have the beauty and healthy life.
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- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying 76
- T P O 53 3
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to s 76
- TPO 21(independent)Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0162412993 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70558315924 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489559164733 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6528916114 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.952380952 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324680452184 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961968802258 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654417080945 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196184990146 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564359925837 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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